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LAKSHMAN

The human element in our epics calls for so much thought and reflection.So few writers and poets engage with this aspect. It's a pity. They never form any part of a student's repertoire and we talk of westernisation as if it were a disease. Do we have anyone to blame but ourselves?

 Sita is fascinating and very complex. Toru Dutt a lesser known poet of the Indian poets inc. has captured in almost Miltonic diction the dilemma of Lakshman as he struggles with the emotional backlash of a woman in panic.

Yet her dauntless stoicism as a single parent and her refusal to go back to Ram give her a strength and tenor that is unique given the times she lived in. Here Laxman is the unchallenged hero, yet when one thinks of the violence with which Lakshman cut off the nose and breasts of Shoorpaneka, you wonder. We can concoct reasons and call her the evil that was destroyed but she was not was destroyed was she? She was only humiliated and left to create greater havoc. 

 Can a man under any provocation do that to a woman? And if Shoorps insulted Sita and therefore invited the wrath of Lakshman, how different is he from the demonic in his actions for justice? These are endless questions we must ask ourselves before we stereotype the good and the bad. I am not sure I even like the word 'bad', I prefer the word 'misguided'.

Again coming back to Sita and her coveting of the golden deer, her stubborn insistence on Ram going after it, her brutal reviling of Lakhsman to leave the hut.... those actions..... one wonders what crossed her mind as she sat listlessly under the trees in the Ashok vatika with time hanging on her hands like heavy boulders .... to think.. all alone.. in trepedition and regret....did Lakshman cross her thoughts?

 

Toru Dutt (1856-1877)

Lakshman

I

"Hark! Lakshman! Hark, again that cry!

It is, - it is my husband's voice!

Oh hasten, to his succour fly,

No more hast thou, dear friend, a choice.

He calls on thee, perhaps his foes

Environ him on all sides round,

That wail, - it means death's final throes

Why standest thou, as magic-bound?

 

II

 

"Is this a time for thought, -- oh gird

 Thy bright sword on, and take thy bow!

He heeds not, hears not any word,

   Evil hangs over us, I know!

Swift in decision, prompt in deed,

  Brave unto rashness, can this be,

The man to whom all looked at need?

 Is it my brother that I see!

 

III

 

"Oh no, and I must run alone,

 For further here I cannot stay;

Art thou transformed to blind dumb stone!

 Wherefore this impious, strange delay!

That cry, -- that cry, -- it seems to ring

   Still in my ears, -- I cannot bear

Suspense; if help we fail to bring

                                   His death at least we both can share"

 

IV

 

"Oh calm thyself, Videhan Queen,

 No cause is there for any fear,

Hast thou his prowess never seen?

 Wipe off for shame that dastard tear!

What being of demonian birth

Could ever brave his mighty arm?

                                          Is there a creature on earth

                               That dares to work our hero harm?

 

V

 

"The lion and the grisly bear

  Cower when they see his royal look,

Sun-staring eagles of the air

  His glance of anger cannot brook,

                                       Pythons and cobras at his tread

  To their most secret coverts glide,

                                   Bowed to the dust each serpent head

                                 Erect before in hooded pride.

 

VI

 

 "Rakshasas, Danavs, demons, ghosts,

    Acknowledge in their hearts his might,

And slink to their remotest coasts,

   In terror at his very sight.

Evil to him! Oh fear it not,

                                    Whatever foes against him rise!

                                  Banish for aye the foolish thought,

                          And be thyself, -- bold, great, and wise.

 

VII

 

"He call for help? Canst thou believe

    He like a child would shriek for aid

Or pray for respite or reprieve --

    Not of such metal is he made!

Delusive was that piercing cry, --

  Some trick of magic by the foe;

He has a work, -- he cannot die,

                               Beseech me not from hence to go.

 

VIII

 

For here beside thee, as a guard

    'Twas he commanded me to stay,

And dangers with my life to ward

                                   If they should come across thy way.

Send me not hence, for in this wood

Bands scattered of the giants lurk,

Who on their wrongs and vengeance brood,

 And wait the hour their will to work."

 

IX

 

"Oh shame! and canst thou make my weal

 A plea for lingering! Now I know

What thou art, Lakshman! And I feel

  Far better were an open foe.

Art thou a coward? I have seen

Thy bearing in the battle-fray

Where flew the death-fraught arrows keen,

                                 Else had I judged thee so today.

 

X

 

"But then thy leader stood beside!

  Dazzles the cloud when shines the sun,

Reft of his radiance, see it glide

 A shapeless mass of vapours dun;

So of thy courage, -- or if not,

 The matter is far darker dyed,

What makes thee loth to leave this spot?

                          Is there a motive thou wouldst hide?

 

XI

 

"He perishes -- well, let him die!

   His wife henceforth shall be mine own!

Can that thought deep imbedded lie

   Within thy heart's most secret zone!

Search well and see! one brother takes

 His kingdom, -- one would take his wife!

A fair partition! -- But it makes

                                 Me shudder, and abhor my life.

 

XII

 

"Art thou in secret league with those

    Who from his hope the kingdom rent?

A spy from his ignoble foes

  To track him in his banishment?

                               And wouldst thou at his death rejoice?

    I know thou wouldst, or sure ere now

When first thou heardst that well known voice

 Thou shouldst have run to aid, I trow.

 

XIII

 

"Learn this, -- whatever comes may come,

   But I shall not survive my Love,

Of all my thoughts here is the sum!

    Witness it gods in heaven above.

If fire can burn, or water drown,

  I follow him: -- choose what thou wilt

Truth with its everlasting crown,

                             Or falsehood, treachery, and guilt.

 

XIV

 

"Remain here with a vain pretence

   Of shielding me from wrong and shame,

Or go and die in his defence

And leave behind a noble name.

Choose what thou wilt, -- I urge no more,

    My pathway lies before me clear,

                                         I did not know thy mind before,

                              I know thee now, -- and have no fear."

 

XV

 

                                She said and proudly from him turned, --

   Was this the gentle Sita? No.

Flames from her eyes shot forth and burned,

                            The tears therein had ceased to flow.

"Hear me, O Queen, ere I depart,

   No longer can I bear thy words,

They lacerate my inmost heart

                             And torture me, like poisoned swords.

 

XVI

 

"Have I deserved this at thine hand?

   Of lifelong loyalty and truth

Is this the meed? I understand

   Thy feelings, Sita, and in sooth

I blame thee not, -- but thou mightst be

  Less rash in judgement, Look! I go,

Little I care what comes to me

Wert thou but safe, -- God keep thee so!

 

XVII

 

"In going hence I disregard

   The plainest orders of my chief,

A deed for me, -- a soldier, -- hard

   And deeply painful, but thy grief

And language, wild and wrong, allow

 No other course. Mine be the crime,

And mine alone. -- but oh, do thou

                          Think better of me from this time.

 

XVIII

 

"Here with an arrow, lo, I trace

                                       A magic circle ere I leave,

                                     No evil thing within this space

   May come to harm thee or to grieve.

Step not, for aught, across the line,

                                 Whatever thou mayst see or hear,

So shalt thou balk the bad design

                                     Of every enemy I fear.

 

XIX

 

"And now farewell! What thou hast said,

  Though it has broken quite my heart,

So that I wish I were dead --

   I would before, O Queen, we part,

Freely forgive, for well I know

   That grief and fear have made thee wild,

We part as friends, -- is it not so?"

                               And speaking thus he sadly smiled.

 

XX

 

"And oh ye sylvan gods that dwell

                               Among these dim and sombre shades,

Whose voices in the breezes swell

    And blend with noises of cascades,

Watch over Sita, whom alone

  I leave, and keep her safe from harm,

Till we return unto our own,

                                     I and my brother, arm in arm.

 

XXI

 

"For though ill omens round us rise

    And frighten her dear heart, I feel

That he is safe. Beneath the skies

    His equal is not, -- and his heel

Shall tread all adversaries down,

  Whoeve'r they may chance to be.

Farewell, O Sita! Blessings crown

                             And peace for ever rest with thee!"

 

XXII

 

                                 He said, and straight his weapons took

 His bow and arrows pointed keen,

Kind, -- nay, indulgent, -- was his look,

                           No trace of anger, there was seen,

Only a sorrow dark, that seemed

  To deepen his resolve to dare

All dangers. Hoarse the vulture screamed,

    As out he strode with dauntless air.

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